She kicks free
her loose stockings;
watches him enter
Skinny, perspiring, green,
he comes quickly
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At first, I thought I was reading this with a dirty mind. But green? Now I’m not so sure.
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I wanted that ambiguity : )
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And you were successful!
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You’ve reminded me to check out World of Chinese again. I used to be a subscriber years ago. Your poem definitely echoes Li Qing Zhao very well. 👏
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Thanks Shaun 🙂
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I love the double entrendre
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Thanks! Bit cheeky
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