A Longette Lite compiled by Karuna Mistry
Blackness; a lackness, absence of brightness, bleakness, absolute white-less
to walk in nothingness, stalk in stealthness, run in blindness, dark chasm nonetheless
shapeless strides more or less, in quickness, fitness — hides fatness, possess finesse
coolness, lack tackiness, hack into systems with hasteness — cyber sabotage no less
a blackened madness, bleak mess, spiral into darkness, regret with sadness
infamous, shameless, ruthless maleness or ruth-femaleness; unadulterated badness
——Blacklisted & Anonymous
Whiteness; a brightness and lightness, heavy weightless in bright spaces–
not outer spaceness, which is shapeless, colourless and tasteless
unlike the salt, sugar and carbness — else, all is plainness, blandness
as if tongueless, when cats catch one’s taste buds, leaves one speechless … blankness
nine lives race through the end-of-the-tunnel to reach oneness
as if anaesthetised and painless, experience euphoria and greatness
arrive at pearly gates, maskless, egoless — not anonymous
to grace God in fearlessness with the salve of love in plain sightness
associate with the likes of Buddha and Jesus
——Whitelisted & Obvious
Greyness; a haziness, blurriness, cloudiness, fogginess
neither here or there mistiness, droplets in the air wetness
feeling grayness; not happiness or gayness, prideless dullness
prizeless — not priceless, to be precise — lest a laziness strikes us
by the shades of un-mystiqueness, a non-mysterious fadeness
a lulled colour spectrum between two absolutes no less
made famous by that 50/50 movie nonetheless
——Gray, Greyer & Grayness
Brownness; a groundness and earthiness — clay, soil, mud, rock groundmass
spherical all-roundness, all around us, orbit in spaceness
groundless gravity boundless Earth’s brownness is
terra firmness, reliant, relentless hardness
between space darkness and sun’s brightness — not dark, nor bright
but middle ground no less — untethered colourist motives frown less
with all-round bareness and bearness; brawn-to-braun brownness
——Brownlisted & Balanceness
Blackness is colourless and brightless
Whiteness is all-colour in lightness
Greyness is nondescriptness but
Brownness belongs to ourness
Words and audio by Karuna Mistry; image by Alex Padurariu, from Unsplash
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Wonderful to see this posted! One of the longest pieces I’ve ever done…
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yes, the longette does force us to be…long. i have the same tendency to be short and sweet
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let me know if you want any changes to spacing or anything!
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I just added photo attribution…oops! And I would love love love to have an audio file from you of you reading it! (prayer hands)
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Gosh, I’m not even fully sure how it sounds spoken aloud! Give me a day or two? (Else nudge me by Friday as my evenings are already filled)
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No rush!
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it will sound fantastic, and you have a great voice!
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Big congratulations Karuna on your awesome Longette Lite! Number 4 of all time. I’m looking at doing tshirt designs for redbubble or something…you can have one that says something like “I was one of the first people to write a longette” : )
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LOL! You should have your website address on there too!
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yes, certainly! and my tshirt will say “Inventor of the Longette” and have an arrow to my face LOL
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I love “heavy weightlessness in bright space” and your critique of whiteness in general so much
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all love to gaia
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Gaia …an inspirational Longette Lite idea?
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good one! I’d like to see your Longette proper, too! Number 4 slot is still open for that…for now! it’s taking off suddenly
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the Gaia idea is a multi author collab work maybe…with you, me, Jessica Perini…who else? One per stanza maybe (so 5 in all)
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A multiple author collaboration sounds perfect! One stanza each is doable… is everyone else in? Catherin, what if you do a group email to see who’s in (or reach out individually) and then proceed from there? Timewise, I would need a few days to even get started though, realistically into the month of Feb to write…
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Karuna, this is so creative and amazing! Everything about it sparkles – I am so, so impressed!
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Nolcha, your response is perfect!
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😁 Thanks, Catherin!
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It is a real headshift Karuna
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totally out of left field, which we love!!
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Fabulous audio by the poet Karuna Mistry himself, just added!
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The audio really brings out the assonance and alliteration so beautifully Karuna! I so appreciate this piece
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I’m just glad I got to pronounce every word clearly, in a good paced meter, and for such a long piece, without making word slips. One mistake and d’oh! Start again from the top!
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Yes that would be rough! I usually don’t mind a slip or two these days
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For recordings, it’s there forever… one has to be a bit of a perfectionist.
I guess for written poetry too… heh
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It doesn’t have to be there forever though…we can always re-record! and edit the poetry later!
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A clever and imaginative exploration of colour, identity, and perception. The wordplay is especially striking!
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Many thanks for the comment, Anowar. And I read some of your blogsite too… I know someone with Indian roots whose ancestors settled in Myanmar.
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My pleasure 😊❤️
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I suddenly remember an old song from 2011 which captures this poem (but was not inspired by!). South Indian artists singing in ‘Tanglish‘ (Tamil + English fusion, deliberately sung in English words but with the Indianised strong accent). It was a light-hearted tune that unexpectedly hit.
If interested, it’s called “Why This Kolaveri Di”: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YR12Z8f1Dh8
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