Written for SenHai Saturday prompt #26 and based on the photo by Maximus Mazar on Unsplash
Haiku and Senryu are both 5/7/5 syllable forms, but whereas a haiku is about a season in nature, a senryu is more concerned with human nature and feelings.
snowdust for a lawn,
glowing cabin’s A-frame roof
echos mountain pines
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yellow eyes, peaked hat
golden face, creamy moustache;
storybook person
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warm eyes belie you,
cold-hearted lover, ice man;
ride my slopes no more
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I enjoyed your humanization of the image. Very nicely done.
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Thanks Violet…wasn’t sure where that fit in terms of being maybe a senryu…perhaps a haiga as it needs the photo!
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You’ve really dug in to this image, Catherin! I can “see” everything you describe in your lines clearly in the image provided. Wonderful!
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i couldn’t stop seeing those eyes!
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I totally can understand! Thank you!
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Nice! I like the personification of the cabin.
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Thank you! Bit of fun.
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I enjoyed these : warm and whimsical —
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ta John!
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